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Erica Proper's avatar

Very helpful! I will definitely try to follow this framework in my next story. Thank you for posting!

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Khadejah J's avatar

My pleasure Hi Vibes! So glad you found this helpful :)

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Daria Cupareanu's avatar

Such a great framework!

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Khadejah J's avatar

Thanks so much Daria!

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Lawson's Fevered Brain's avatar

This article is helpful, but I struggle with a lack of expertise. I'm wondering if that's a problem. Now that I think about it, I'm doing well without one. I have found that emotion and building empathy between me and the reader is what I build my content on, and it's working.

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Khadejah J's avatar

Hey Lawson, to be honest, I feel like everyone has a skill or something they’d done for a long time and knows how to do well. Sometimes it requires you to dig deep though. 💪

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Ranjit K. Sharma's avatar

Hi Khadejah! Here's my comment following your PAS structure, where I tried to imitate, err ... sorry, emulate you!😀

P (Problem): I used to believe that expertise alone could carry a writer’s voice across the noise. I would pour facts into my articles like water into a vase, hoping readers would sip and be nourished.

A (Agitation): But as you so brilliantly point out, Khadejah, without story, that vase often sat untouched. Expertise without narrative is like a lighthouse with no light—impressive structure, but no guidance. I have watched posts packed with value sink into silence, while vulnerable stories float to the surface and shine. Your reminder hit hard: the story is the spark that turns knowledge into connection.

S (Solution): Your PAS framework is gold, and the 3-Story Strategy? A gem tucked inside an already rich chest of insight. I love how you blend instruction with inspiration—you do not just tell us how to write better, you show us by the way you write. That is art in motion. I am walking away not just with a tool, but with a shift in my storytelling soul.

You did not just teach—you lit the page on fire.

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Khadejah J's avatar

Wow, thanks so much Ranjit! This is so cool!💪💪💪

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